Wo de Tian Jie Nu You

Once upon a time ? Unless in the process of creating something closer to an Art Performance or a Happenning (which almost ensure that viewers won't understand at least 50% of it anyway) than an anime, there's at least 2 things that should be quite important, regardless of the rest : The story, and its flow. Obviously, I'm not trying to reduce the importance of the visual, the music/sound, acting etc etc, but I would like to point out that when an anime fails very early to provide a fluid story, or - at the very least - a correct way to address its audience, itbasically fails to communicate anything. The point being - unfortunately - that this is the very basic problem of Wo De Tian Jie Nv You : You will rapidely notice, from the 1st episode at that, a very clumsy, naive, almost crude way of telling a story. For example, basic transitions from a scene to another are pitiful, leading to misunderstandings about what happened. Or sequences introduced so fast that the viewers will fail to understand to which events these are supposed to be related. Or catastrophic CG effects (to the point that calling them CG is already a praise) which, inconsistent at best and perfectible at worst, won't do much to immerse the viewers into the painful story. This could have been done a lot better, but since it fails at this early state of its execution, I think Wo De Tian Jie Nv You would have been better without existing at all, or delayed further in order to prevent these kinds of flaws. I don't recommend it at all, unless you're an inconditional chinese anime lover. And even with that, watching this anime won't get exactly easier...